Showing posts with label Kim Bowman. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Kim Bowman. Show all posts

Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Three Truths and a Lie with Kim Bowman



Kim Bowman lives in Indiana, where she was born and raised. For the past thirteen years, she has been married to her best friend, Tony. She has four wonderful, awesome children. Three she was lucky enough to inherit from her husband and one she was given by the grace of God. They live on a small farm with two of their four kids, five horses, and Lex the lovable pit bull. Although she has notebooks full of songs, poems, and short stories she has composed, it wasn’t until she started doing technical writing for her job that she really got the bug and decided to take her English professor’s advice and write novels for a living. 

Let's see if you can guess Kim's big fat fib :)



When we were kids, my sister and I set our bed on fire smoking cigarettes, nearly burning the house down.

I once had a groundhog chew my wiring harness to shreds and build a nest on my engine in my car.

When we were kids, I kicked my sister in the mouth, knocking out her four front teeth.

I used to give horseback riding lessons to pro-basketball player Calbert Cheaney.



Friday, October 5, 2012

Flashback Friday

Ghosts in the Graveyard by Kim Bowman Ghosts in the Graveyard
Kim Bowman
YA Paranormal
61 Pages
To Purchase


Blurb: While most kids can’t wait to dress up in costumes and go out trick or treating, Charlie, Jack, and Millie Foster dread Halloween. Even the promise of receiving a slew of candy doesn’t interest them. How could it when they know the truth about All Hallows Eve? That it’s really a day to fear, a day when the dead walk the earth again.

With their house sitting directly behind a graveyard, they are prime targets for the spirits to haunt.


Chapter One
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.

~Author Unknown

“Charlie, I’m scared. I don’t want the bogies to come.”

Four-­‐‑year-­‐‑old Millie Foster looked up at her big brother with
wide, frightened eyes as she pointed out the window toward the
cemetery. Charlie focused his attention in the same direction and
his stomach tightened. He didn’t want the bogies to come either,
dreaded seeing nightfall approach. The scene out the window only
heightened his fear.

Dusk had set in, causing long, eerie shadows of the
gravestones to stretch toward the house as if reaching for them. The
grassy field between the cemetery and the back door of the Foster
home was the only barrier of protection they had against the
restless souls buried there. The bright, deep red of the setting sun
cast a glow across the earth that made it look like blood was
blanketing the cemetery. The mist on the ground billowed up,
mixing with the dark shadows and the crimson rays of the sun,
making it appear that the spirits were rising up from their graves,
escaping. And Charlie had no doubt that on this night, the night
when the veil between the dead and the undead lifted, the roused
spirits would once again descend on their quiet home.

A chill ran up Charlie’s spine and he wrapped his arm
around Millie, pulling her close. He knew if he was scared, Millie
had to be terrified.

“It’ll be okay, Silly Millie. Me and Jack’ll keep you safe.” At
least he hoped so, wondering where their eight-­‐‑year-­‐‑old brother
was. He should have been back from his supply run by now.
Charlie hoped he hadn’t been caught by their mother.

“And Mommy too?”

“And Mommy too.”

“Can I sleep in your room tonight?”

“Sure. You and me and Jack can have a slumber party.”
Charlie tickled her and Millie giggled. “But we better not tell
Mom.”

“Cuz Mommy will get very mad if she hears us talkin’ ’bout
ghosts. She don’t believe us that we saw them come right in the
house.”

Their mother had scolded him and Jack for hours for scaring
Millie with their “silly nonsense” about the dead coming to life on
Halloween. Said she’d lived by the cemetery her whole life and had
never seen any ghosts and that if she caught them filling Millie’s
head with more of their stories she’d wash their mouths out with
soap every day for a week. Then she’d make them read five
chapters from the Bible. Out loud.

“I wish Daddy was here.”

“Me too, Silly Millie.” Charlie smiled at the little moppet. He
knew there was no way Millie remembered their father. She’d only
been a few months old when he’d left for war. Charlie barely
remembered their dad and he’d been six when Charles Senior’s
unit had been called to fight. But she talked about him like she
knew him, claimed to play games with him. Charlie thought that
was good, even if their mother didn’t like it and told him to quit
encouraging Millie’s imagination. But he liked talking about their
father and told her stories about him, mostly to keep the man fresh
in his own mind, just in case…

Millie puffed her chest out. “He’d believe us. He’d help us
keep the ghosts in the graveyard!”

Charlie smiled at her conviction. “He sure would, Silly M—”
“I got it! I got it!” Jack yelled as he ran into the room, a flour
sack in one hand and one of their mother’s kitchen crocks in the
other.

“Quiet! We don’t want Mother to know what we’re doing,”
Charlie whispered as he resisted the urge to clamp a hand over
Jack’s big mouth.

Eight-­‐‑year-­‐‑old Jack winced. “Oh, yeah, sorry.” He lowered
his voice. “I got everything on our list.” Jack crouched down, sat
the crock on the floor, opened the sack, and pulled out a canister of
salt, a mason jar full of clear liquid, some string, and some book
pages.

Millie ran to Jack, flopped down on the floor beside him, and
picked up the glass jar. “What’s this?”

“Holy water,” Jack answered.

“Where did you get holy water,” Charlie asked.

Jack’s face and the tips of his ears turned almost as red as his
hair. “I, um, got water from the kitchen and as I held the Bible over
the top of the jar I repeated ‘I turn you to holy water’ three times.”
Since Charlie had no clue if that would work or not, he just
nodded his head at Jack. He bent down, picked up the book pages,
and scanned a couple lines. A fine rain now made her still more
dismal…“Jack! You tore these pages out of Mother’s Virginia Woolf
book! She’ll clobber you!”

Jack winced. “We need them to make paper straws so we
can blow the black salt on the ghosts if they come, Charlie. I’ll put
them back. I promise.”

“Black salt?”

He picked up the crock. “Yeah. I emptied the salt from the
shaker into this bowl and got ashes and soot from the fireplace and
mixed it together. That makes black salt and—”

“You scooped up ashes from the fireplace and put it in one
of Mother’s good kitchen crocks. She’ll tan your hide for sure.
You’re going to get us all in trouble.” Charlie shoved his little
brother on the shoulder, causing the boy to tip over backward onto
his bottom.

“I couldn’t find anything else to put it in,” Jack whined.
“And she’ll never know we used it. We’ll clean it up and put it
back.”

“No, you’ll clean it out and return it. And if you already put
salt in that concoction, why did you bring the whole canister of salt
with you?”

Jack gave him a toothy grin. “You’ll see.”

Millie touched her finger to the mixture and sniffed it. Her
eyes watered and she broke into a series of sneezes. “That—stuff—
burns,” she finally managed, wiping her nose with the sleeve of her
shirt then shaking her head vigorously.

“Goofy, why’d you do that?” Jack pulled the crock back.
“Because she’s four. Are you okay, Millie?” Charlie asked.
She shook her head. “I’m okay.”

“Well, genius, I hope it works better on ghosts,” Charlie said
in a tone that clearly said the black salt wouldn’t be of any use.
“It will. Don’t worry.” Jack picked up one of the book pages
and rolled it to make a tube. “Charlie, hold this real tight.”

Charlie did as requested, holding the cylinder at each end.
Jack picked up the string and wrapped it around the tube from one
side to the other, having Charlie reposition his hands so he could
cover the whole thing with string. He made a couple more passed
around and then tied the string off. He took the tube and held it
vertically. “Thanks. What you do is cover the bottom with a finger,
take some of the black salt, and drop it in the top.” Jack
demonstrated as he spoke. Then he turned his back to Charlie and
Millie. “Then you hold it up to your mouth, take your finger off,
and blow.” Black particles flew from the straw.

Millie squealed and clapped her hands. “Do it again! Do it
again!”

“Don’t you dare. You’ve made enough of a mess,” Charlie
said, annoyed.

Jack squinted one eye and a frown pinched his forehead as
he focused on Charlie. “Quit scolding me. You could make yourself
useful and help make up the straws. We have to be ready or the
evil spirits will come and get us.”

Charlie glanced at their sister. “Shut up, Jack!”

Millie let out a yelp and slammed into Charlie, knocking the
air out of him. “Don’t let the evil spirits get me, Charlie. I want
Mommy.” She began to cry.

Charlie bent down and wrapped his arms around her. He
locked eyes with his brother and gestured his head toward their
little sister.

Jack shrugged his shoulders. “What?”

Frustrated, Charlie rolled his eyes. “Silly Millie, Jack’s just
been reading too many scary books. No goblins or ghouls are
gonna come to get you.”

The frightened girl buried her face deeper into Charlie’s
shoulder. “B-­‐‑but th-­‐‑they will come. You said so. I don’t want the
bogies to get me. I want Mommy.”

Charlie’s shirt was damp from the tears. He was going to
beat Jack senseless the first chance he got. Better yet, he’d make
sure their mother found out about her book being destroyed. That
would get Jack in a whole mess of trouble.

He squeezed his sister, not sure how to comfort her when he
was scared himself. Maybe Millie had the best idea and they should
tell their mother they were scared. But she hated Halloween and all
the talk of ghosts and monsters. Called it the work of the devil and
said if someone could see those things, that person was evil. Even
refused to let them participate or watch the church’s yearly
rendition of Charles Dickens’s A Christmas Carol. But Charlie didn’t
feel evil. Millie certainly wasn’t evil. Jack was an idiot who didn’t
think before he opened his big mouth, but not evil. Still, Charlie
couldn’t deny what he’d seen with his own eyes over the past few
Halloweens, whether his mother believed them or not.

Jack rummaged in the sack. “Hey, Silly Millie, I have
something that’ll for sure keep you safe. Ah ha!” He pulled out a
string of garlic cloves and offered it to the crying girl.

Millie lifted her head and wiped her nose with the sleeve of
her shirt. Her face was stained with tears and covered in red
blotches. “It smells funny. What is it?”

“It’s the best protection you can have. Nothing will come
near you as long as you’re wearing this.” Jack leaned over and
looped the necklace around her neck.

Millie pinched her nose. “It smells bad.”

Charlie gagged. “You moron. She can’t go down to dinner
wearing that. How will we explain it to Mother?”

Jack thunked his head with the palm of his hand. “Oh, right.
Sorry, Millie, we’ll have to wait until after we eat.”

“Okay, Jack.” She pulled the string over her head and held it
out to him, then jerked her arm away before his fingers touched the
garlic. “You promise to give it back, don’t you?”

“Of course. I made it just for you. I got one for me and
Charlie too.”

“I’m not wearing that thing.”

“You gotta, Charlie! Please,” Millie said, throwing her arms
around his neck.

“Jack! Ugh! Now see what you’ve done! All right, all right.
I’ll wear the stupid necklace.”

“What did I do?”

Charlie rolled his eyes. “Where do I even sta—”

“Millie, Charlie, Jack, dinner!”

“We’re coming, Mom,” Charlie called. He pointed to the
supplies scattered about the floor. “Jack, get that stuff picked up
and hid somewhere in case Mother comes up here.” Then he took
Millie by the shoulders and looked her in the eyes. “Listen, Millie,
remember not to tell Mother what we’re doing up here. She won’t
like it and we’ll all be in trouble. And we won’t be able to put on
the garlic necklaces Jack made and make paper straws.”
“I won’t say anything. I promise.”

“Good. Once we eat and Mother goes to bed, me and Jack’ll
come get you.”

“Okay! Come on. Let’s hurry and eat before it gets dark.”

She jumped up and ran out the door.

Charlie was slower to get to his feet, dreading the night
ahead. Jack scooped up the things from the floor and dropped them
in the sack then carried it and the crock to the closet and set them
inside, covering them with a quilt. As he crossed the room toward
the door, Charlie whopped him upside the head.

Jack rubbed the spot. “Ouch! What did you do that for?”
“Because you’re an idiot.” Charlie stalked out the door,
disgusted.

“Charlie.”

He jerked around and stared at his brother. “What?”
“We’re gonna be okay, aren’t we? I mean, this stuff’s gonna
work to keep the ghosts out of our house this year, isn’t it?”
“I hope so, Jack. I hope so.”

Friday, March 30, 2012

Author Recipe: Kim's Concoction

Written by Kim Bowman


My writing partner, Kay Springsteen, will not be surprised to hear that I cook like I write—by the seat of my pants! Yes, I am cookpantser! And I’m happy to say most of the meals I “invent” end up being family favorites. (We won’t talk about the crock pot cheesecake incident.)

My better half often clips recipes from the paper he wants me to try. Here a few months ago he brought home one called “Cheesy Baked Lentils, Rice and Turkey Casserole” and ask me if I could make it that night. “Sure,” I said enthusiastically.

Now…the title alone should have made me say no because, well, I don’t readily keep lentils or turkey on hand…ahem, cookpantser. So…I go searching the pantry and fridge. Here is the conversation I had with myself:

“No turkey, so I’ll use hamburger. No onions or spinach…I’ll use cabbage and French fried onions. Brown rice…brown rice…nope, guess I’ll use this box of instance wild rice. Hmmm…I don’t have any lentils or lentil soup either. Oh! I have some tortilla soup. I’ll use that. I don’t have Swiss or sharp cheddar cheese. I think it’ll be ok with shredded Colby-jack. Oooooo, I bet this would be good with some of the corn we froze from our garden.”

So of the listed ingredients, the only one I used was ¼ cup of water. Yeah, I live like I write—by the seat of my pants!

Kim’s Cheese Casserole

1 Can of Tortilla soup (or lentil soup, or Chicken mushroom soup…)
1 Box of long grain and wild rice (don’t cook)
8 oz hamburger
1 Cup (or two) French fried onions
1 or 2 Cups shredded cabbage
½ pkg (4 oz or 6 or 8) shredded cheese (I used Colby-jack, but use your favorite)
1 Cup corn
¼ to ½ Cup water

Brown the hamburger. Preheat oven to 350. Combine all ingredients except the cheese in a casserole dish, cover, and bake for 40 minutes or until the rice has absorbed all the liquid. Uncover and sprinkle the cheese on top and bake an additional 5 minutes. YUM-MY!


Price: $2.99


Buy it HERE.


Ladies’ maid, Juliet Baines has gotten herself into a pickle by agreeing to go to London and taking the place of her mistress and best friend, Annabella Price, stepsister to the Duke of Wyndham. After all, what does a servant know about being a lady? But Juliet soon finds that pretending to be a lady isn’t nearly as hard as guarding her heart against the folly of wanting a man who’s completely out of reach.

Graeme "Grey" Roland Dominick Markwythe, Sixth Duke of Wyndham, approaches his duties as a nobleman with great dedication and meticulous care. And he’s a man who is not easily fooled...except when he tries to convince himself he's not utterly and madly in love with the beautiful imposter who has turned his life upside down. Will society and his responsibilities to his noble status keep him from opening his heart to the woman he loves?

Excerpt:

Grey glanced about. Lady Rossington and her ridiculously giddy debutante daughter had halted their walk along Newport Street and stared enraptured at the sight. He bit off a curse. The whole of London will be laughing about the scandalous scene by nightfall.

He stepped forward only to be stopped again when a young girl darted from the rear of the carriage. Presumably this was Annabella, though she’d grown some since their last encounter. Her yellow and cream traveling gown swirled about her legs with each step, and she tugged a short dark green jacket into place as she walked. Golden curls peeked from beneath a green bonnet decorated with flowers and cascaded over her shoulders.

With quick movements, she grasped the dog’s collar and gave it a yank, tugging against the massive brute. Grey’s stomach twisted into a tight knot. He’d soon have two injured people on his hands.

He opened his mouth to tell her to get back when the animal let out a high-pitched yelp and the girl stood, dragging the dog up with her.

“You naughty boy, that’s quite enough.” She spoke sharply, her tone brooking no argument.

The dog jerked its head around and snapped at her.

She simply thumped him on the nose and he let out a shocked yap. “You mind your manners.”

The dog growled and wheezed and showed his teeth; all the while the rest of his body wiggled and his tail wagged wildly.

Wonder if she could do that with Lucien.

Tuesday, March 27, 2012

What's New?

It's new release day at Astraea Press. Look at the great book we have to offer! Don't you love the cover? I do. The premise sounds fantastic, too!



Price: $2.99


Blurb:

Ladies’ maid, Juliet Baines has gotten herself into a pickle by agreeing to go to London and taking the place of her mistress and best friend, Annabella Price, stepsister to the Duke of Wyndham. After all, what does a servant know about being a lady? But Juliet soon finds that pretending to be a lady isn’t nearly as hard as guarding her heart against the folly of wanting a man who’s completely out of reach.

Graeme "Grey" Roland Dominick Markwythe, Sixth Duke of Wyndham, approaches his duties as a nobleman with great dedication and meticulous care. And he’s a man who is not easily fooled...except when he tries to convince himself he's not utterly and madly in love with the beautiful imposter who has turned his life upside down. Will society and his responsibilities to his noble status keep him from opening his heart to the woman he loves?


Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Writer Wednesday: It's all about Voice and Vibe by Kim Bowman

V All You Can V
In the world of writing it’s sometimes impossible to know which rules and guidelines we should follow, which ones we should break.  It’s simple. All of them and all of them. One thing my experience as an editor and writer has taught me is that anything goes.
For instance, some of my fellow Astraea Press authors and I were recently discussing several well-known writers who head hop. With most publishing houses this is a big no-no. Yet these authors’ books are making the NYT best sellers list. Same with those evil words we’re not supposed to use such as to be verbs, words ending in -ly, the word “that”, etc. A number of famous writers constantly break these rules and no one is slapping them on the hand. So how do they do it? What’s their secret? 

It boils down to the V’s: VOICE and VIBE.
First and foremost you have to develop a voice as a writer. Voice is the way the author tells the story. It’s a specific style that is unique and expresses the writer’s interpretation of the story. Are you rolling your eyes thinking you’ve heard this before? Trust me when I tell you it’s one of the most valuable pieces of advice you’ll ever get.
In a recent post on Terry Odell’s blog (http://terryodell.blogspot.com/2011/03/what-was-that.html#more), she discussed using the word “was”. More specifically, she talked about how fiction writers aren’t supposed to use passive verbs. She listed several citations from both classic and current books to demonstrate how much of a staple the word “was” truly is even though the rules say avoid it.
The best example came from the opening paragraph of A Tale of Two Cities. I thought it would be interesting to rewrite it, taking out “was”. Here’s what I came up with:
            Good times and bad times abounded. On one side stood the wise. The other side, the foolish. You couldn’t tell the epoch of belief from the epoch of incredulity. The season of Light, the spring of hope, said we had everything before us, we were all going direct to Heaven. Yet, the season of Darkness, the winter of despair, proved we had nothing but the promise we would go direct the other way. In short, the more things change, the more they remained the same.
Not to toot my own horn, but not bad. At least not until you read Charles Dickens’ version:
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way—in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.
Some of you might argue that this is a classic, so of course we wouldn’t change it. But why is it a classic? What made Dickens special? Even now he’s considered a master of fiction, and I guarantee if A Tale of Two Cities was being published today most editors wouldn’t touch that opening. I wouldn’t. His voice stood out then just like it does now. I cried when I finished it and, twenty years later, my heart still aches when I think about Sydney Carton. Dickens’ writing elicited that kind of reaction from me. His voice was that strong and he gave me “the vibe”.
There’s an episode of Friends in which Joey is reading Louisa May Alcott’s Little Women. Joey goes to Rachel and Monica’s apartment crying because he’s just read the part where Beth dies. Rachel asks him if he wants to put the book in the freezer and he shakes his head yes. That’s how I want to feel when I read a book.
Some of you might be thinking, “Isn’t that the same thing as voice?” No, far from it. Vibe goes much deeper. Voice entertains our mind, while vibe caresses our heart. I remember the first time I experienced such a strong feeling with a book. I was in fourth grade and the book was Where the Red Fern Grows by Wilson Rawls. My emotions ran the gamut. Sad one minute, anxious the next. Angry, and then, finally, grief. While I loved the story, adored the characters, and could totally relate with a boy’s love for his dogs, it was more than that.
I care about my neighbor. We’re very close and she’s a part of our family. But when her dog died, I didn’t cry. I was sad for her, felt bad, but no tears. When Billie’s dogs Dan and Ann died in Where the Red Fern Grows, I was devastated and bawled like a baby. I literally felt as if I had lost a loved one. Same with Audrey Niffenegger’s Her Fearful Symmetry when the kitten died.
Sometimes vibe is better when seen through the eyes of a child. My two-year-old son came running into the house all excited the other day. He was babbling about something but the only words I understood were fast, daddy, bucket, tractor. Even at that, he had my full attention. Not because he’s my son, but because of his excitement, his passion.
The funny thing is, when my husband walked into the kitchen and I asked him what Cage was going on about, he said, “Oh, we took the tractor and a bucket to the end of the driveway and picked up some of the rocks in the yard.”
Pretty boring and uninteresting, right? Just a mundane, everyday task. But the way Cage told it, eyes wide and dancing with delight, little hands moving all over the place, grinning from ear to ear, I was totally enthralled to here, “Blah blah fast blah blah daddy blah blah bucket blah blah tractor.” He did more than just tell me what he had done. His words (VOICE) and his excitement (VIBE) painted a picture that engaged my senses.
How many times have you loved an author’s work, couldn’t wait to read the next book, and then something changes. The pros are great, the plot is wonderful, but you just don’t “feel” it. The author’s lost his luster, so to speak.
Voice is like riding a bicycle. Once you’ve figured it out, you’ve got it and you’ll never lose it. It becomes second nature. Vibe, on the other hand, is like riding a horse. You might not forget how it’s done, but you always have to think, react, and be on your toes. No putting the kickstand down and parking a horse for a year or two and then coming back to pick up where you left off. Horseback riding might be an ability you can master, but it’s definitely a constant learning experience that takes extreme dedication. We own five horses and they all have their own personalities, quirks, and flaws. I can ride them all, but I ride the one I enjoy and even that is challenging at times. Each book you write is unique in its characters, plot, setting, etc. Yet your voice remains the same, just like riding a bike. But your vibe must change, compromise, vary, and adjust with each new project, much like riding a horse.
Now, I’m in no way implying that an author’s voice is easy and anyone can do it. Voice takes skill, talent, and practice. Maybe riding a bike is second nature now, but was it when you started out? Didn’t you fall off quite a few times before you learned how to ride? But once you got it, you got it. Same with voice. It takes awhile to develop your style. You have a bunch of hits and misses along the way. But once you know how to write prose that work, where to end a chapter to make your reader want to keep turning the page, when and where to weave in back story, and how to balance showing with telling, it becomes ingrained in you. It’s a technique that you never forget.
Vibe, on the other hand, has to change to fit the story, yet must maintain the same power and impact that readers expect. It’s a daunting task, but the payoff is remarkable if you persevere.
When you put the two V's together, you get a variety that will keep readers coming back for more. The important thing is to practice, practice, practice, and V all you can V.

Also don't forget about....
The six of us have decided to throw a bash in honor of our wonderful book and the amazing cause it's going to help. And with a party comes PRIZES PRIZES PRIZES!!! So here's the scoop of prizes. We're running this hop until Saturday at midnight EST. We'll have 4 winners. Prizes will be as follows
1st place be the Princess Diana beanie baby bear and an Astraea Press coupon code to use toward the purchase of any titles on the Astraea Press website, plus an ecopy of a book currently available by one of the six of us (winner's choice)
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Thank was a great post Kim voice is so important and also requires writing again and again. To find out more about Kim click here.







Friday, May 6, 2011

Feature Friday: Astraea Press Collaboration of a Short Story And Now We Shall End With Menstrual Cramps, Clucky and Hoodwinked


Well it's the end of the rode on this little short Astraea Press' authors put together for all our pleasure. Since it all started with three words we thought it would be only fitting to end it with three words. To go back and read it from the beginning hit part 1 and well you can figure out the rest. Also Kay Springsteen and Kim Bowman did Part four as well as this last installment. We thank all the AP authors who contributed to this endeavor.










Monday, April 25, 2011

Character Monday: Casting Characters and Visualization by Kim Bowman


I don’t know about other writers, but trying to describe what my characters look like is the hardest part of writing for me. I’ve never suffered from writer’s block, although maybe that’s what this is. I know what I want to happen and how I want my characters to react and feel. The problem I sometimes have is translating the description of my hero and/or heroine on paper. Maybe that’s a form of writers block is. Just a lack of knowing the right words to use rather than a lack of words.
Anyways, I digress.
My problem was solved when I bought my husband the Hoyle Card Games. He LOVES Euchre, Hearts, etc. and I thought it would be great if he could sit with his Net book and play cards while I wrote to my heart’s content. Guess what? You get to design your own player! I thought I would have some fun so I started designing my husband’s avatar. When I finished I couldn’t believe what I saw. I had created the likeness of my hero. WHAM!  I just stared at the screen. I grabbed a piece of paper and started writing a description of what I saw: strong chin, wavy auburn hair, deep, soul-searching blue eyes. I suddenly saw what was in my mind’s eye.
I decided to try it with my heroine. I already knew she had emerald green eyes, but I couldn’t visualize how to turn a spirit guide into a human. I started moving face shapes around, trying different noses, lips, eyebrows. All of a sudden she was looking out at me.  Her beautiful, raven hair and emerald green eyes accentuated her oval face and sharp chin. Her eyes were beautiful but sad. She was carrying the weight of the world on her shoulders.
Amazingly, if you look at the heroine and hero on my book cover, you see how spot on Elaina Lee got them. They were so close to the images I had in my head and the avatars I came up with (and, no she had no clue I had created these) it was uncanny. The only thing she had to go on was the general description I provided her with, yet she captured the essence of my characters perfectly.
So now, the Hoyle Card Game character creator is my new best friend when it comes to constructing characters in my stories. It has solved the whole brain freeze problem I had going on. A strange and unusual way to write, but it works for me!

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Wow Kim that's for sharing this amazing resource. Visualization is such an important aspect for me as a reader as well as and author. To check out Kim's book Wayward Soul or find out more about her click the title or here. 

How do you cast your characters or visualize characters in a book you are reading?